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Kay Soi 200 Word Challenge – Chronological Order – Tasted The Best Food You’ve Ever Tasted (T4W1)

200 Word Challenge

The 200 Word Challenge is an opportunity to practise writing using just the right words. 200 Words might sound like a lot, but once you get going you’ll find yourself crossing that line easily, so be careful to only say what you NEED to.
(This whole thing is over 100 words already)

For Week One your challenge is to write a 200 word recount of a time you…

Tasted the best food you’ve ever tasted.

Remember! This week we have been learning about chronological order. Make sure you get the sequence of events in the right order.

Begin your writing here:

The best food I have ever tasted I think it is duck with rice. It’s good and my family buys takeout and gives it to me. It’s sooooo delicious and I love it. I can’t remember the first time I’ve ever tasted it. But it’s so delicious and I don’t know what to do to make this two hundred words like I don’t know. And it’s so delicious, did I say that already? I don’t know how I will make this two hundred words, but if I don’t, I never complete writing work anyway.

Yes, it’s so delicious. I will try to recount the last time I ate rice with duck. The last time I ate rice with duck was in my last apartment and it was so so so so so so so so yummy, delicious, enjoyable, appetizing, juicy, and tasty. The last time I ate it uh I think in my old apartment the day before moving out I think and I loved it and it’s so delicious with rice and I think my parents buy it at GI or some other place. And we ate on the leftover cardboard boxes because all the furniture got moved. I loved eating it as a little kid and still love it and uh it’s already two hundred words so yeah this may be the worst writing I have ever done in my life. It’s maybe even worse than my year 1 writing and I only did 105 words on the actual recount so I don’t think I will post this.

Hello! This is my writing for the first week of the term and please don’t read this because it’s very bad and I finished this yesterday but didn’t post it because I didn’t plan on posting it, But I did

Kay Soi Term 4 Immersion Assembly Recount Writing

Term 4 Immersion Assembly Recount Writing

(Unfinished)

Today I went to school after the 2 week holiday and it was nice seeing everyone again and we went inside after the 8:30 bell rang and Ms Tuia let us inside our classrooms. When the 8:50 bell rang room 7 lined up outside our classroom and we went to the hall when Mrs Lagitupu came outside and we went with her to the hall. When we saw the stage we were confused why there was a big tub of water and water that seemed to be leaking from the roof. And then Mr Burnt started talking about term 4 for a few seconds, Mrs Noa came to the front of the hall but she was not on the stage and then Mrs Noa asked about the tub of water.

 

Mr Jacobson came on stage. He explained that there were leaks around the school due to climate change but they fixed them but when they came to school in the morning there was a leak on the stage. And he got a 1000 litre tub to catch the water but the tub is almost full (800 litres) and he doesn’t know how to move it.  Mrs Noa was angry that they chose a shortcut and now they have a big tub of water on the stage and didn’t fix the leak. Mrs Noa went up on stage and then Mr Somerville came on stage and said that they could use a siphon to get rid of the water and then told Mr Jacobson to put a thing that looked like a hose (I forgot the name) in the tub and hold it still.

 

Mr Somerville turned the hose thing on because he connected it to a water thing and turned the water on and the students saw it coming. But, the hose water didn’t reach the tub water. And the students saw the water going down and they were disappointed. The water came up again and it reached the tub water and then the students were a bit happy. And then Mr Somerville said that he was going to drop the hose thing and it will make a siphon. And then he dropped the hose thing and then the tub water started to come out along with the hose water.