Write about a time you were surprised or shocked. Make sure you write to the best of your ability. Use good descriptive and imaginative vocabulary and make sure you use correct punctuation and spelling.
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I get surprised a lot but I will be writing about a time last year when I got surprised at camp. It was the first day of camp and they were telling us what cabin group we were in. We were sitting down in the hot sun and they were calling letters then names. It got to the letter R, and they called out my name. I stood up waiting for my friends because we got to pick our cabin roommates so of course I picked my friends! But then they stopped calling the names, they paused then said a letter, but I didn’t hear any of my friend’s names? Did that mean I was in a different cabin with none of my friends???? >:C
I was shocked, then frustrated, but then I had to pick up my day bag and put it on my back because I needed to go to my room. I was sad because I had to share a room with someone I didn’t like. It was bad enough that no one I picked was in my cabin, but someone I didn’t like was in my cabin!!!! So of course I wanted to know why they did this! But I couldn’t do anything, so I just had to deal with it. But at least my roommates didn’t bother me and were quite nice and Camp Bentzon was still fun even though it could have been better.
_________________________________________________________________________________Hello! This is my writing and it’s about a time I was surprised!!!!